Thursday, April 15, 2010

WRITING REFLECTION

Ideas and content
My writing demonstrates appropriate ideas and content. In some of my writings, I stayed in topic and tried not to get off topic. I try to get more details but while I try to do that, I forget about my main topic and begin writing about other things. I can improve my writing by taking out the rubric and looking at it while writing the main topic. Also, I can give at least 4 good reasons for each evidence I write about.

Organization
My organization was not that good because I couldn't draw people in to read my essay and to grab others attention to read on. My body paragraphs were sometimes all over the place but I tried my best to get on topic and not to go onto a different topic while writing.

Personal Growth
I think my growth went down when I look at those two essay because I was prepared for the Alchemist but I wasn't for the Julius Caesar. I was not prepared for Julius Caesar essay because I did not spend a lot of my time on it and also my organization was not that great and people who read it was not interested to read my essay.

SLR's
The SLR that I would choose for all these essay is Think Creatively because all of those essay needed to think carefully to plan what I needed to write and what I did not need to write. Also, I had to write carefully that I don't forget about my main topic.